Friday, 30 June 2017

Eye report for writing

The past two weeks in writing we have been working on reports that have to do with parts of the body and I chose to write a report on the eye out of our three options (eye, heart or pancreas). I transferred the report from a google doc to a google slide to present it. Did you know that silver isn't a shade of blue? Read on!


  1. A very informative report, Jessie!

  2. Hi Jessie, my name is Brodi and I go to Paihia School. I really like your eye report. Your facts about eyes are amazing. You taught me facts like your eyes start with an optic nerve. How long did it take to make your eye report?

  3. Kia ora Jessie,
    My name is Molly and I got to Paihia School. I really enjoyed reading your eye report, you wouldn’t think that the human eye has so many complicated little parts. It must’ve taken a lot of research to find all those facts. Keep up the good work!

  4. Kia ora Jessie my name is Cilla and I am a year seven student that goes to Paihia School. I really like your writing that you have written it is a really nice story.


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